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Dear Cillian, This is a good reflection of what your learning task was and what the picture shows. I like how you have added in some labels to assist the reader. What do you know about earthquakes and how they happen? Mrs Aperahama
Kia ora Cillian. My name is Calias and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I like your scenario and I like that drawing I think you did from google drawings.Also did you replicate the earthquake?
Kia ora Cillian. My name is Cameron and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. Good job on the 3 little pigs house in an 8.9 earthquake. One thing that you could work on is make the background a bit more realistic and have trees or something.Also what house were you trying to do because for me it looks like the brick one
Hello my name is Cody and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne,Tairāwhiti. Good job on the 3 little pigs house in an 8.9 earthquake. I think you could tell us whether the house was made of sticks or bricks. I liked thinking about the story.
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Kia ora Cillian. My name is Calias and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I like your scenario and I like that drawing I think you did from google drawings.Also did you replicate the earthquake?
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ReplyDeleteHello my name is Cody and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne,Tairāwhiti. Good job on the 3 little pigs house in an 8.9 earthquake. I think you could tell us whether the house was made of sticks or bricks. I liked thinking about the story.
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