For writing we wrote a piece of writing with the five senses. See, hear, smell, feel, and taste.
I added descriptive words for the piece of writing.
There is a title saying “the fresh island”
I found trying to not put “I can” tricky.
Have you written something like this before?
The fresh island
As I swim through the water I smell the salty water in front of me.
A pale white boat splashes in the clear glassy water. Spiky mountains rise up above. Dark bushy hedges all lined up. A small skinny island rests in the water.
As I walk to the shore I hear beach waves crashing. The gentle breeze blows against the trees.
The fresh cold breeze blows against my face.
The clear glassy water flows beside me.
I taste the salty water in my mouth from the waves.
Kia ora Cillian.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ashwin. I am a student in Hauraki at Waikowhai Primary School.
I really liked how you made a story about that clean picture.
Something you could do differently is adding a google slide animation to go with it.
Maybe you could create an ending to the story too?
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